if your trying to be a critic dont, if your trying to write properly dont.
a simple peice of journalistic advice, cut to the quick and talk about what you want to talk about, rather than talk about retagging your mp3 collection for more than 1/4 of the article before talking about the gig your supposed to be reviewing.
also try highlighting the positive side of bands, all 3 reviews are distinctly negative, how about providing feedback about what you would like to see?
Submitted by Anonymous (not verified) on Wed, 29/03/2006 - 10:34.
if your trying to be a critic dont, if your trying to write properly dont.
a simple peice of journalistic advice, cut to the quick and talk about what you want to talk about, rather than talk about retagging your mp3 collection for more than 1/4 of the article before talking about the gig your supposed to be reviewing.
also try highlighting the positive side of bands, all 3 reviews are distinctly negative, how about providing feedback about what you would like to see?